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The bar chart depicts the proportion of males and females in Australia in various ages who got used to do physical activity in 2010. It clear from the graph, women were more active and sportive than men. According to what is shown, firstly, the age group of 15 to 24 years, males accounted for the highest contribution at 52. 8 percent, while the percentage for women was a little bit less at 47. 7 percent. The ratio of sportive men from 25 years to 64 years sustained between 39. 5 percent and 45. 1 percent. Also, the percentage of females in the same range of ages was always higher than men’s, moreover it rocketed its peak as it reached 53. 3 percent. Finally, according to the information for the ladies and gentlemen who were 65 years old and over, their two proportions were almost at the same level with a tiny increase by nearly 0. 4 percent for females. To sum up, we could say that, male teenagers were more energetic than women, on the contrary the percentages for adults presented totally contrary behavior.

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 from 25 years to 64 years sustained between 39. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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. Also
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. Finally
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 for females. To sum up, we could say that, male This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
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 were more energetic than women, on the contrary
 the percentages for adults presented totally
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