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The charts show the amount of UK graduate and postgraduate students did not go to full-time work in 2008

The charts show the amount of UK graduate and postgraduate students did not go to full-time work in 2008 1oJeW

The given charts analyze the data about UK graduate and postgraduate students that did not enter full-time work after leaving college in 2008 Overall, it is clear that the proportion of students entered further study has an upward trend all the time and another key feature is that the amount of graduate pupils is far more than than the amount of the postgraduate pupils Initially, one can see that destinations of UK graduates were particular. The further study stood out with about 29, 665 pupils, which was the highest and the part-time work took the second place, which was about 15, 735 pupils. The unemployment was only by half of further study with approximately 16, 235 pupils and the last but not the least, the voluntary work had only 3, 500 students, which was the least at that time. Subsequently, destinations of UK postgraduates were far less than destinations of UK graduates. Once again here, the further study was still reached the highest peak with about 2, 725 pupils. Chasing behind was the part-time work with approximately 2, 535 pupils and then we can see that the unemployment reached only 1, 625 pupils. Finally, the voluntary work had the lowest amount with just below 350 pupils

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