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Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. » Write at least 150 words.

Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. » obpRD

The line graph illustrates the acid level which is caused by consuming sugary substances with 5 minutes time intervals and water level in our mouths. Overall, it is clear that consumption of cane sugar is likely to be the highest rate to occur decays while fruit sugar and honey stands second and third places respectively. Water level below 5. 5 is taken as a dangerous initial point leading to decays. With regards to cane sugar consumption, there is a dramatic drop in water level (around 3. 5) after eating for 5 minutes and the figure goes up steadily till 30 minutes. Fruit sugar which causes water level to significantly drop at around 4. 3 where decays can occur and it increases gradually to 7 back after 35 minutes of eaten time. In term of honey consumption, the acidity increases drastically as water level declines to around 4. 8 and it remains unchanged till 10 minutes. After that, the figures climb up at 7 after 25 minutes and it stays the same after 45 minutes.

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level
 which is caused
 by consuming sugary substances with 5 minutes time intervals and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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level
 in our mouths.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that consumption of cane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 is likely to be the highest rate to occur decays while fruit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 and honey stands second and third places respectively
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
Water
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level
 below 5. 5 is taken
 as a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 initial point leading to decays.

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With regards to
 cane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 consumption, there is a dramatic drop in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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level
 (around 3. 5) after eating for 5 minutes and the figure goes up steadily
 till 30 minutes. Fruit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 which causes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 to significantly
 drop at around 4. 3 where decays can occur and it increases gradually
 to 7 back after 35 minutes of eaten time.

In term of honey consumption, the acidity increases drastically
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 declines to around 4. 8 and it remains unchanged till 10 minutes. After that, the figures climb up at 7 after 25 minutes and it stays the same after 45 minutes. 