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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The charts depict changes in tourism of two nations from 1960 to 2010. Overall, Australia and Germany saw a drastic growth of Asian tourists from 1960 to 2010. While, the maximum number of tourists in Germany was from Europe, Australia saw a spectacular decline in European tourists between 1960 and 2010. In Australia, the number of Asian tourists were less with 10% only in 1960 that went up to 63% in 2010. Although, there was a slight decrease of 5% tourists from USA and Britain from 1960 to 2010, the number of European tourists dropped dramatically from 53% to 10% over the 50 year period from1960 to 2010. In Germany, a gradual dip of 5% was seen in the number of tourists from Europe that was from 45% in 1960 to 40% in 2010. Also, a sharp decrease of tourists from Britain was seen that went down from 20% in 1960 to 6% in 2010. A significant rise in Asian and USA tourists was seen with an increase of 15% and 4% respectively.
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in tourism of two nations from 1960 to 2010.

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, Australia and Germany
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saw
a drastic growth of Asian
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tourists
from 1960 to 2010. While, the maximum
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number
of
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tourists
in Germany was from Europe, Australia
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a spectacular decline in European
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tourists
between 1960 and 2010.

In Australia, the
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number
of Asian
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tourists
were less with 10%
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in 1960 that went up to 63% in 2010. Although, there was a slight decrease of 5%
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tourists
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from USA
and Britain from 1960 to 2010, the
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number
of European
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tourists
dropped
dramatically
from 53% to 10% over the
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50 year
period from1960 to 2010.

In Germany, a gradual dip of 5% was
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seen
in the
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number
of
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tourists
from Europe that was from 45% in 1960 to 40% in 2010.
Also
, a sharp decrease of
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tourists
from Britain was
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seen
that went down from 20% in 1960 to 6% in 2010. A significant rise in Asian and USA
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tourists
was
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seen
with an increase of 15% and 4%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.

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