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The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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From 1960 to 2010, over a 50 year period time how tourism in Australia and Germany developed and what is the distribution across different parts of the world is discussed below. During 1960, 53% of Australians visited Europe, 25% Britain, 12% the USA and the remaining 10% constitutes Asia, however, numbers are significantly changed in this 50 years. In 2010, 63% traveled to Asia, 20% to Britain, 10% to Europe, and the remaining 7% USA. when it comes to Germany in 1960, 45% of people traveled to Europe, 25% to the USA, 20% to Britain and only 10% choose Asia as their travel destination. Now let's look at how numbers changed in 2010, 40% to Europe, 29% and 25% to the USA and Asia respectively, only 6% of germans traveled to Britain. over these 50 years, it is observed that the majority of Australians choice of travel changed from Europe to Asia, but a large section of germans still loves to travel to Europe.
From 1960 to 2010, over a
50 year
period time how tourism in Australia and Germany developed and what is the distribution across
different
parts of the world
is discussed
below.

During 1960, 53% of Australians visited Europe, 25% Britain, 12% the USA and the remaining 10% constitutes Asia,
however
, numbers are
significantly
changed
in this 50 years. In 2010, 63% traveled to Asia, 20% to Britain, 10% to Europe, and the remaining 7% USA.

when
it
comes
to Germany in 1960, 45% of
people
traveled to Europe, 25% to the USA, 20% to Britain and
only
10% choose Asia as their travel destination.
Now
let
's look at how numbers
changed
in 2010, 40% to Europe, 29% and 25% to the USA and Asia
respectively
,
only
6% of
germans
traveled to Britain.

over
these 50 years, it
is observed
that the majority of Australians choice of travel
changed
from Europe to Asia,
but
a large section of
germans
still
loves
to travel to Europe.
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