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The given illustration elucidates the process of Olive Oil manufacturing.

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The given illustration elucidates the process of Olive Oil manufacturing. Overall, it can be seen that diagram is divided into 7 different steps and gives details to each of them. In the beginning, olives are picked from the tree and then prepared for manufacturing via rinsing though cold water. Afterwards, due to the moving belt olives go through a stage called smashing. This special equipment is used for producing olive paste and stones. In the next step, smashed olives are put in the bag with holes on them for the process of pressing. The 6th stage consists of separating of oil stones from the previous step. This division go with water addition for producing oil. Eventually, oil shipped to storages and markets for selling.
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illustration elucidates the process of Olive
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Oil
manufacturing.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that diagram
is divided
into 7
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different
steps and gives
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details
to each of them.

In the beginning,
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olives
are picked
from the tree and then prepared for manufacturing via rinsing though
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cold
water. Afterwards, due to the moving belt
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olives
go through a stage called smashing. This special equipment is
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used
for producing olive paste and stones. In the
next
step, smashed
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olives
are put
in the bag with holes on them for the process of pressing. The 6th stage consists of separating of
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oil
stones from the previous step. This division
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go with
water addition for producing
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oil
.
Eventually
,
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oil
shipped to
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storages
and markets for selling.
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IELTS academic The given illustration elucidates the process of Olive Oil manufacturing.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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