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The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. AO2M

The pie chart reveals information about the status of tourism of period 50 years in Australia and Germany. The time period contains the year from 1960 and 2010. Upper two pie charts represents Australia while lower pie chart shows the tourism status of Germany. In the year 1960, Europe has played a siginificant role in both countries occuprying large sector of tourism involvement to itself. Europe maintained its high amount of involvement in the year 2010 too. Whereas, Asia overtook Europe in the year 2010 in Australia. Britain has been providing steady amount of tourists to Australia in both year 1960 and 2010. Unlike Europe, from where tourists decreased drastically in Australia. The amount of Britain's tourists decreased in great number too regarding Germany. Except for Asia which has made sudden increase or decrease in the tourists to both countries, both Britain's and USA's tourists has been flowing steadily to both countries without much change. From the figure above, we can conclude that Germany recieves maximum number of tourists from Europe following up with USA. Where Australia has recieved maximum number of tourists from both Asia and Europe in the year 2010 and 1960 respectively. In both countries, USA, Britain, Asia and Europe has been fulfilling the 100 percentage of flow of tourists.

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 maximum number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
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 from both Asia and Europe in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2010 and 1960 respectively
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