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The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. 19oN
The chart compare the quantity of tuirists which has visited 2 country in 1960 and 2010. Beginning with Australia, more than half part of tourists went there during 1960 were from Europe while this number has been decreased until 10% in 2015. After fifty year, we see 5% reduction in the proportion of tourists from Britain and USA on the other hand, it was 25% and 12% respectively. Only increment is the measure of Asian which has been risen from 10% to 63% during fifty year. Secondly, a quarter part of people which came to Germany were from USA in 1950 and this rate rose 5% in the contrary of Europe consequently, while it was 45% declined and became 40%. As it can be seen the main increase in the percentage of Asian that rose 15% and contained 25% of all tourists. Finally, in 2010 the least percentage was included by british which they covered only 6% whilst were one in five fifty years ago.
The chart compare the quantity of
tuirists
which has visited 2 country in 1960 and 2010.

Beginning with Australia, more than half part of tourists went there during 1960 were from Europe while this number has
been decreased
until 10% in 2015. After fifty year, we
see
5% reduction in the proportion of tourists from Britain and USA
on the other hand
, it was 25% and 12%
respectively
.
Only
increment is the measure of Asian which has
been risen
from 10% to 63% during fifty year.

Secondly
, a quarter part of
people
which came to Germany were
from USA
in 1950 and this rate rose 5% in the contrary of Europe
consequently
, while it was 45% declined and became 40%. As it can be
seen
the main increase in the percentage of Asian that rose 15% and contained 25% of all tourists.
Finally
, in 2010 the least percentage
was included
by
british
which they covered
only
6% whilst were one in five fifty years ago.
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IELTS academic The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.

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