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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. jWbN
The bar graph demonstrates where do the variety of Canada population usually visits. It is manifestly apparent from the illustration that people living in Canada have been divided into three categories, native Canadians, new migrants who were born in English-speaking countries, and new migrants who were born in non-English speaking countries. Based on what is displayed, the majority of libraries visitors are original Canadians visit, cinemas come second as a percentage of fifty percent. Over one-quarter of people born in Canada spend time going to zoos. while about only 10% tend to go to theatres. While over half the new migrants who were born in English-countries are most likely to visit Cinemas. Zoos are the second favourite option for them. Followed by libraries then theatre at 40% and 25% in a row.
The bar graph demonstrates where do the variety of Canada population
usually
visits. It is
manifestly
apparent from the illustration that
people
living in Canada have
been divided
into three categories, native Canadians, new migrants who
were born
in English-speaking countries, and new migrants who
were born
in non-English speaking countries. Based on what
is displayed
, the majority of libraries visitors are original Canadians visit, cinemas
come
second as a percentage of fifty percent. Over one-quarter of
people
born in Canada spend time going to zoos.
while
about
only
10% tend to go to
theatres
.
While
over half the new migrants who
were born
in English-countries are most likely to visit Cinemas. Zoos are the second
favourite
option for them. Followed by libraries then
theatre
at 40% and 25% in a row.
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