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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. M5q9
The graph compares the percentage of income spent by people in the UK and USA on petrol. Overall, the percentage of income spent on fuel generally gets higher in the UK, the more you earn, whereas it decreases in the US. The difference between the poorest and the richest is greater in the UK than in the USA. In the former, the poorest spend less than 0. 5% of their income on petrol, and the richest spend around 3%. Although the richest and middle income citizens of the UK spend similar amounts, ranging from 3. 5 to 4%. In contrast, in the US, the poorest spend around 4-5% while the richest spend between 2 and 3% and generally the proportion spent has an inverse relationship with wealth. While in both countries people on the high end of middle incomes and the low end of rich incomes spend about the same percentage, between 3. 5% to 4% the richest in America spend 1% less than their counterparts in the UK.
The graph compares the percentage of
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spent by
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people
in the UK and USA on petrol.
Overall
, the percentage of
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income
spent on fuel
generally
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gets
higher in the UK, the more you earn, whereas it decreases in the US.

The difference between the poorest and the
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richest
is greater in the UK than in the USA. In the former, the poorest
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spend
less than 0. 5% of their
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income
on petrol, and the
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richest
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spend
around 3%. Although the
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richest
and middle
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income
citizens of the UK
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spend
similar amounts, ranging from 3. 5 to 4%.
In contrast
, in the US, the poorest
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spend
around 4-5% while the
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richest
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spend
between 2 and 3% and
generally
the proportion spent has an inverse relationship with wealth.

While in both countries
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people
on the high
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end
of middle
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incomes
and the low
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end
of rich
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incomes
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spend
about the same percentage, between 3. 5% to 4% the
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richest
in America
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spend
1% less than their counterparts in the UK.

IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

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