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The charts show average journey times before and after improvement in a city center, and the average cost of different modes of transport there.

The charts show average journey times before and after improvement in a city center, and the average cost of different modes of transport there. o6BX3
The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city. From the bar chart gives information to the number of people using public transport. The cheapest average cost per kilometer was bus with € 0. 40 average cost per kilometre. Tram has had € 0. 50 average cost per kilometre, which was more expensive than bus, but cheaper than car. Taxi spent € 1. 80 average cost per kilometre, so taxi was the most expensive average cost per kilometre. According to the table, it can be seen that bus was economic public transport increasing 5 minutes from average journey time before improvement and after improvement from 28 minutes to 23 minutes. Tram increased 6 minutes after improvement from 22 minutes to 16 minutes, but taxi and car decreased 2 minutes and 5 minutes after improvement. In conclusion, bus is the cheapest public transport with € 0. 40 average cost per kilometre and increases 5 minutes after improvement. Taxi is the most expensive of the other public transport but has decreased 2 minutes after improvement.
The table and bar chart
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how journey times in a city
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centre
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changed
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improvements
were made
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transport
network, and the
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costs
of using
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different
forms of
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transport
in the city.

From the bar chart gives information to the number of
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people
using
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public
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transport
. The cheapest
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average
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cost
per kilometer was bus with
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€ 0
. 40
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
. Tram has had
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€ 0
. 50
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
, which was more expensive than bus,
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cheaper than car.
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Taxi
spent
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€ 1
. 80
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
,
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so
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taxi
was the most expensive
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
.

According to the table, it can be
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seen
that bus was economic
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public
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transport
increasing 5 minutes from
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journey time
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before
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improvement
and after
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from 28 minutes to 23 minutes. Tram increased 6 minutes after
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improvement
from 22 minutes to 16 minutes,
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taxi
and car decreased 2 minutes and 5 minutes after improvement.

In conclusion
, bus is the cheapest
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public
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transport
with
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€ 0
. 40
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
and increases 5 minutes after
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improvement
.
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Taxi
is the most expensive of the other
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public
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transport
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has decreased 2 minutes after
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improvement
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IELTS academic The charts show average journey times before and after improvement in a city center, and the average cost of different modes of transport there.

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