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The bar chart describes the amount of comparative data of students in the UK who completed their dissertation ( on time or late ), failed or needed to revise it in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Overall, as can be seen that the number of Postgraduate Dissertation Projects completed on time or late were higher than the number of students who failed to write and rewritten in each of the years. In 1990, a total of 150 students finished their dissertation on time. This figure dramatically increased between 1990 and 2010 and reached a peak of 300 students in 2010. A similar trend could be seen in the figures for the students who completed their projects late. The number of the late-finished dissertation grew gradually from 20 in 1990 to 50 students in 2010. Moreover, students rewritten their projects fluctuated with a moderate increase and a slight decrease about 20 to 10 respectively By contrast, the number of students who failed had a downward trend, this figure slowly dropped from 1990 to 2010, about 50 to 10 students.
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