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The line graph and bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature for an area of East Afica

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The line graph and bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature for an area of East Afica Overall, the temperature in March is the highest point during a year, the opposite is true for July. In addition, the average of rainfall in April accounts for the largest amount over the year. As can be seen from the line chart, the average monthly rainfall in two first month are relatively low, just around 25mm, which is followed by a significant increase to reach a peak at approximately 280 mm in April. In the following months, the weather seem to be drier in the following months as the averange of rainfall hits the lowest point at about 15 mm in July. Then the amount of monthly rainfall increases to 150 mm in October, which is a little lower than that figure in November. Finally, the figure for average rainfall decreases considerably to just 50 mm in the last month. Regarding the average temperature, there is a significant increase from 22 degree in January to a peak of 28 degree in March. The temperature experiences a dramatical decline to meet the lowest point at 18 degree in July but quickly then it rises again to above 25 degree in three months later. In the two final month, the region experiences the colder weather with the monthly temperatures stand at around 20 degree.
The line graph and bar chart illustrate the
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and
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for an area of East
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Afica


Overall
, the
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in March is the highest point during a year, the opposite is true for July.
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, the
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average
of
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in April accounts for the largest amount over the year.

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seen
from the line chart, the
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in two
first
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are
relatively
low,
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around
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25mm
, which
is followed
by a significant increase to reach a peak at approximately 280 mm in April. In the following
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, the weather seem to be drier in the following
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as the
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averange
of
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hits the lowest point at about 15 mm in July. Then the amount of
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increases to 150 mm in October, which is a
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lower than that figure in November.
Finally
, the figure for
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decreases
considerably
to
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50 mm in the
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last month
.

Regarding the
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, there is a significant increase from 22
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in January to a peak of 28
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in March. The
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experiences a
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dramatical
decline to
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the lowest point at 18
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in July
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quickly
then it rises again to above 25
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in three
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later. In the two final
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, the region experiences the colder weather with the
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temperatures
stand at around 20
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IELTS academic The line graph and bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature for an area of East Afica

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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