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3.Sawry district The maps illustrate the reconstruction of Sawry district from 1920 to 2020 revealing what have changed and what has remained undeveloped.

3. Sawry district The maps illustrate the reconstruction of Sawry district from 1920 to 2020 revealing what have changed and what has remained undeveloped. K3YKL
3. Sawry district The maps illustrate the reconstruction of Sawry district from 1920 to 2020 revealing what have changed and what has remained undeveloped. Overall, the Sawry district witnessed dramatic changes and was completely modernized into a residential area during the time period; notwithstanding, Oak avenue among the districts appears to have been left undeveloped. Originally, there was Tulebug Bros. Cannery; nonetheless, it was converted into Yang office complex. The most noticeable addition was that this office complex in the northeast side was built by demolishing power plant. Another major change was that lonoco petrol station replaced where was a Prestwich primary schoolat Miller’s Lake. Addtionally, bridge which was connected to the Oak avenue has been added across the Elmowood river; on the other hand, the Oak Avenue remained relatively unchanged.
3.
Sawry
district

The maps illustrate the reconstruction of
Sawry
district from 1920 to 2020 revealing what have
changed
and what has remained undeveloped.
Overall
, the
Sawry
district witnessed dramatic
changes
and was completely modernized into a residential area during the time period; notwithstanding, Oak avenue among the districts appears to have been
left
undeveloped.
Originally
, there was
Tulebug
Bros. Cannery; nonetheless, it
was converted
into Yang office complex. The most noticeable addition was that this office complex in the northeast side
was built
by demolishing power plant. Another major
change
was that
lonoco
petrol station replaced where was a
Prestwich
primary
schoolat
Miller’s Lake.
Addtionally
, bridge which
was connected
to the Oak avenue has been
added
across the
Elmowood
river;
on the other hand
, the Oak Avenue remained
relatively
unchanged.
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IELTS academic 3. Sawry district The maps illustrate the reconstruction of Sawry district from 1920 to 2020 revealing what have changed and what has remained undeveloped.

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