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The maps illustrate the new settlement of Happy valley center in 1982 and 2012 revealing what have changed and what have remained same.

The maps illustrate the new settlement of Happy valley center in 1982 and 2012 revealing what have changed and what have remained same. Ykmqn
The maps illustrate the new settlement of Happy valley center in 1982 and 2012 revealing what have changed and what have remained same. Overall, the Happy valley shopping center witnessed dramatic changes and was completely modernized into shopping mall during the time period; however, entertainment area and toilets appear to have been left undeveloped. Originally, there was a lake in the northeast side of the shopping center; nonetheless, in 2012, it was converted into furniture retail. The most noticeable addition was that a furniture retail was built by expanding the shopping center. Another major changes were that themed restaurants and food store are relocated in where were sport store, electronics store and furniture retail in the southeast side of the shopping center. Additionally, a parking lot was constructed in southeast side. There were few trees front of the lake. However, the entertainment and toilets remained same without being touched.
The maps illustrate the new settlement of Happy valley center in 1982 and 2012 revealing what have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
and what have remained same.
Overall
, the Happy valley
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
center witnessed dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and was completely modernized into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
mall during the time period;
however
, entertainment area and toilets appear to have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
undeveloped.
Originally
, there was a lake in the northeast side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
center; nonetheless, in 2012, it
was converted
into furniture retail. The most noticeable addition was that a furniture retail
was built
by expanding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
center. Another major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
were that themed restaurants and food store
are relocated
in where were sport store, electronics store and furniture retail in the southeast side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
center.
Additionally
, a parking lot
was constructed
in southeast side. There were few trees front of the lake.
However
, the entertainment and toilets remained same without
being touched
.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the new settlement of Happy valley center in 1982 and 2012 revealing what have changed and what have remained same.

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