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Salary rate between women and male

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of average weekly wages which men and women earn in five categories: manual laborers, administrative workers, professionals, service workers and technicians in Houston, Texas. Overall, it is evident that men always have higher amount of average weely salaries than women do. Additionally, employees in professionals’ occupation have the highest salaries in five categories in the majority of the period. Admittedly, professionals have the highest income in five categories in the surveyed period which men earn exactly 2000 as well as women earn approximately 1800 USD per week. Moreover, professionals have the least difference between the amount of remuneration between men and women in various jobs. However, there are about nearly 1200 and 800 USD per week which men and women earn from doing manual workers as well as employees working in this category have the lowest income in several jobs. Moreover, men’amount of average weekly salaries working in administrative, service workers and technicians have just a little difference between 1350 and 1450. Noticeably, women working in adminstrative field have the highest income in three other categories with 1000 use per week meanwhile they in service and technician earn the lower revenue resource with under 1000 USD per week.
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always have higher amount of average
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salaries than
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occupation have the highest salaries in five
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in the majority of the period.
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have the least difference between the amount of remuneration between
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