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The graphs below show predicted trends for the audience of the online TV channel, iTV, both globally and regionally.

The graphs below show predicted trends for the audience of the online TV channel, iTV, both globally and regionally. ABeaw
A glance at a given charts elicits pertaining to the numbers of the viewers of online TV channel and iTV as well as their assumable trends globally and regionally. Overall, it can be scrutinized that, globally this trend augmenting significantly whereas, regional have less numbers of viewers of TV and iTV as compared to globally. To begin with, globally, the TV and iTV watcher is 130 million in the initial year of 2012 and it will be soared rapidly to 145 million, as year passed to the mid of 2015. Probing further, audience take less interest to watch, so the graph will fall to 140, but it again starts to rise continuously and cross the peak ratio of 155 million tv-goers till 2019. Additionally, regionally, Europe has the highest numbers of viewers through all given years. While, America, Eurasia and Africa and the middle east will having a consistent trend, nearby 10 million watchers. Probing ahead, Asia and the pacific always will upward by three folds than other regions except the Europe and reach to maximum viewers will be crossed over 50 million.
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iTV
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iTV
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globally.

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watcher is 130
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in the initial year of 2012 and it will
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, as year passed to the mid of 2015. Probing
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, Europe has the highest numbers of
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IELTS academic The graphs below show predicted trends for the audience of the online TV channel, iTV, both globally and regionally.

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