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The charts give information about the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries

The charts give information about the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries 7rPWX
The pie charts gives information about the distribution of water in the world and the bar chart illustrate the water use in 3 sectors among 3 countries. The Units are measured in percentage (%). Overall, the salt water was majorly occupied, and the least share was by fresh water. As regards of the fresh water, the major share was occupied by ice and glaciers; whereas the surface water had a minimum distribution. As regards of the water use, it was high among agriculture sector in Egypt, Saudi Arabia; while Canada has the highest usage of water in the sector of Industry. With in the pie chart, there was 97% distribution of salt water; while the fresh water was with least share of 3%. In the fresh water, ice and glaciers had occupied a share of 79%; whereas 20% was occupied by ground water, while the surface water had a minimal water distribution of 1%. As for the bar chart, the use of water was more among Egypt, Saudi Arabia in agriculture sector with nearly 80%, 75% respectively. While Canada shared approximately 80% usage of water in industrial sector; however, the domestic sector was maintained equal use of water among 3 countries.
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gives information about the
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distribution
of
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water
in the world and the bar
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illustrate the
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use
in 3
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sectors
among 3 countries. The Units
are measured
in percentage (%).
Overall
, the salt
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was
majorly
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occupied
, and the least
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share
was by
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fresh
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water
. As regards of the
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fresh
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water
, the major
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share
was
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occupied
by ice and glaciers; whereas the surface
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water
had a minimum
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distribution
. As regards of the
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water
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use
, it was high among agriculture
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sector
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia; while Canada has the highest usage of
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water
in the
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sector
of Industry. With in the pie
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chart
, there was 97%
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distribution
of salt
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; while the
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fresh
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water
was with
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fresh
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, ice and glaciers had
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a
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share
of 79%; whereas 20% was
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by ground
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water
, while the surface
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had a minimal
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water
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distribution
of 1%. As for the bar
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, the
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use
of
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was more among Egypt, Saudi Arabia in agriculture
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with
nearly
80%, 75%
respectively
. While Canada shared approximately 80% usage of
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in industrial
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;
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, the domestic
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sector
was maintained
equal
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of
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water
among 3 countries.

IELTS academic The charts give information about the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries

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