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Student room in an Australian university for two people and one person

Student room in an Australian university for two people and one person m2X9A

Introduction: The given Process chart describes different amounts for Student room for two people and one person respectively in an Australian university. Passage 1: First, if we take a Student room for two people, it costs $350 per week. The room which they provide contains 2 beds, 2 study desk with microwave behind it, and also a bookshelf provided behind the study desk 1, a table with 2 chairs and a cupboard, a tv, a bathroom and kitchen with stove and sink. There is a distance of 6 meters from the kitchen to bed 2. Also, there is a distance of 4 meters from bed 2 to windows. Passage 2: When it comes to the Student room for one person it costs $200 per week. They don't provide much furniture in this room as it is only for one person. The room provides only one bed and a study desk behind it. Here they are not providing table and chairs, cupboard. However, the room provides a kitchen with stove, sink, microwave and also it has a tv in the hall. There are 6 meters distance from the kitchen to bed and 2. 5 meters distance from the bed to windows. Overview: when comparing the given details, for one and two people rooms in an Australian university, there is less furniture provided for one person room than for the two people room as it contains $150 more.

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