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The charts below shows the percentage of students in a british university use able to speak to other language expect inglish in 2000 and 2010

The charts below shows the percentage of students in a british university use able to speak to other language expect inglish in 2000 and 2010 06QA1
The prescribed pie charts compare the information about the use of several languages by a british university's students expect english in th year of 2000 and 2010. Overall, the highest number of student delivered their speak on spanish only in the given period whereas germany was less popular to tje students of the university. In terms of on other language, the percentage of leaders was 20% in 2000 which fell down to 10% in the following decade, followed by franch only. The percentage of students in case of germany was constant over the giver period. There was highest percentage of pupils almost 30% in 2000 in respect of spenish which rose up by 5% in 2010. On the other hand, the remaining two types of languages had shown quite similar behavior. Around 15% & 10% student of the british university were in another language and two other language in beginning year that rocketed to 20% & 15% in the end.
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