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comparison line graph which demonstrates different payment methods in us. from 2005 to 2000

comparison line graph which demonstrates different payment methods in us. from 2005 to 2000 ApyBN
The assigned line graph demonstrates four most popular methods of payment in the US from 2000 to 2005. It can be clearly seen that cash was a preponderant method of paying among all other payments in initial year. With this, cheque and credit card demand upsurged gradually whereas the use of cash and debit card start following downward trend. In case of cheque number of consumers plunged sustainably from 35 % to 25%, from year 2002 to 2003 rerespectively. On, the other hand cheque and credit card precisely soared together till year 2003, noted as 30%, whereas Debit card was the least popular way of payment, and consumers using cash and credit card equally in year 2004, after that a defensive movement was notable till the last year (2005). M, ore specifically cash preference among consumers was constant from 2004 to 2005. In terms of debit card it recorded as half of cheque and credit card with the continuous decline at 10%. Overall, Debit card was the least popular way among people, while cheque was gaining popularity throughout the period. Pls evaluate my task
The assigned line graph demonstrates four most popular methods of payment in the US from 2000 to 2005. It can be
clearly
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seen
that
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cash
was a preponderant method of paying among all other payments in initial
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year
. With this,
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cheque
and
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credit
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card
demand upsurged
gradually
whereas the
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use
of
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cash
and debit
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card
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start
following downward trend. In case of
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cheque
number of consumers plunged
sustainably
from 35 % to 25%, from
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year
2002 to 2003
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rerespectively
. On, the other hand
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cheque
and
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credit
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card
precisely
soared together till
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year
2003, noted as 30%, whereas Debit
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card
was the least popular way of payment, and consumers using
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cash
and
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credit
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card
equally
in
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year
2004, after that a defensive movement was notable till the last
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year
(2005). M, ore
specifically
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cash
preference among consumers was constant from 2004 to 2005. In terms of debit
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card
it recorded as half of
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cheque
and
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credit
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card
with the continuous decline at 10%.
Overall
, Debit
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card
was the least popular way among
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people
, while
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cheque
was gaining popularity throughout the period.

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