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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below illustrates the activities about Anthropology students do after completing their graduation and the table at the bottom is showing the salary range of them working after 5 years. It it seen that 52% of Anthropology graduate start full-time work after completing the degree while 15% work as part-time basis. On the other hand, only 5% students continue studying for their post graduate alongside part-time work and 8% students do post graduate study only. A significant amount as 12% of graduates remain unemployed when there are no trace for remaining 8% students’ activities. According to the table given, we can see that Anthropology graduates earn after working 5 years, first category between $25000 to $49999, 5% do freelance consultants and 5% work in the government sector when 10% work for the private companies. Salary range $50000 to $74999 which is second category in the table, both freelance consultants and government sector workers capture 15% each sector and private company workers still dominating here with 35%. Third category in the table salary range $75000 to $99999, here three sectors freelance consultants, goverment job and private company are contributing comparatively 40%, 30% and 25%. Finally, the highest catagory of earning that is $100000+ sector where government sector has a clear domination with 50% and private companies captures only 30%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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