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The graph below showthe population figures of different types of turtles in india between 1980 and 2012

The graph below showthe population figures of different types of turtles in india between 1980 and 2012 DEak
The line chart illustrates the information regarding the populace of distinct kind of turtles in a particular country of India from 1980 to 2012Overall, the olive Ridley turtles were the maximum population in india throughout the period while leatherback turtles recorded least populace. Although initially each type of turtles population experienced same number. As represented in the chart, all categories of turtles populace started at 100 million in 1980. With regard to the figure of olive Ridley and leatherback turtles populace experienced opposite trend as olive Ridley showed a rapidly growth to nearly 135 million till 1996 and then remained constant at the rest of the year. On the contrary, the population of leatherback turtle witnessed stable position from 1980 to 1988 along fluctuations and then dramatically declined till 2012. Moving further, the populace of all species and green turtle both figures showed slight incline of approximately 110 million and 108 million respectively in 1987. Followed by similar trend of oscillations and constant in rest of the period where green turtles showed below population as opposed to all species populace
The line chart illustrates the information regarding the populace of distinct kind of
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turtles
in a particular country of India from 1980 to 2012Overall, the olive
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Ridley
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turtles
were the maximum
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population
in
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india
throughout the period while
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leatherback
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turtles
recorded
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turtles
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population
experienced same number. As represented in the chart, all categories of
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turtles
populace
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started
at 100
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million
in 1980. With regard to the figure of olive
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Ridley
and
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leatherback
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turtles
populace experienced opposite trend as olive
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Ridley
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million
till 1996 and then remained constant at the rest of the year.
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population
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leatherback
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turtle
witnessed stable position from 1980 to 1988 along fluctuations and then
dramatically
declined till 2012. Moving
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, the populace of all species and green
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both figures
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showed
slight incline of approximately 110
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million
and 108
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respectively
in 1987. Followed by similar trend of oscillations and constant in rest of the period where green
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turtles
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population
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populace
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IELTS academic The graph below showthe population figures of different types of turtles in india between 1980 and 2012

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