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The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, on average, at one university, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, on average, at one university, in 2000 and 2010. gqkJ3
The pie charts compared the average percentages of money spent on various purposes by an university student from 2000 to 2010. Between 2000 and 2010, the most amount of money was recorded to be spent on food and drink at home with 29%, which was unchanged. Similarly, throughout the 10-year period, the proportion of money spent on sports and cultural remained to be 17%, the third highest. There was a significant rise in the figure for utilities, from 21% to 27%. Meanwhile, in 2000, going out to eat was the most uncommon while studying university with 4% of the expenditure only, which was doubled in the next 10 years. Despite ranking low, transport experienced a slight increase of 1%. By contrast, a dramatic fall was seen in the figure for clothes, from 16% to 5% in 2010, the lowest. Overall, although the percentages of money used for different things mainly flutuated a varioty of degrees, spending on cooking and drinking at home remaning to be the highest over the years surveyed.
The pie charts compared the average percentages of
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university student from 2000 to 2010.

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on food and drink at home with 29%, which
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spent on sports and cultural remained to be 17%, the third highest. There was a significant rise in the figure for utilities, from 21% to 27%.

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in the figure for clothes, from 16% to 5% in 2010, the lowest.

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