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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts below depict the number of waters that are used for various purposes that are detailed from six areas in percentages, namely, North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia according to categories such as industrial, agriculture, domestic First of all, the differences show In North America and Europe consume much water in industrial with percentages of 48% and 53%, respectively. In contrast, South America (10%), Africa (7%), Central Asia (5%), and South-east Asia (12%), they are not interested at all to spend much water in an industrial sense. On the other hand, South America, Africa, and South-east Asia use tremendous water for Agriculture purposes that percentages more than 70% in each area, which averagely in Central Asia less than 12% will be 100%. In the meantime, domestic purposes provide a slight comparison in the region. South America (19%) leads the sequence, following by Europe (15%), North America (13%), which Africa (9%), Central Asia and Southeast Asia (7%). It looks all Continents agree to give minor priority in domestic use which all water used percentages are below 20%. Overall, the amount of water used varies in each region. The data presents North America, and European continents have spent water for the industrial aims. Meanwhile, South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South-East Asia prefer agriculture as their priority for water used. Furthermore, all Continents give minor priority in domestic use.
The pie charts below depict the number of
waters
that are
used
for various purposes that
are detailed
from six areas in
percentages
,
namely
,
North
America, South America, Europe, Africa,
Central
Asia, and Southeast Asia according to categories such as
industrial
, agriculture, domestic

First of all
, the differences
show
In
North
America and Europe consume much
water
in
industrial
with
percentages
of 48% and 53%,
respectively
.
In contrast
, South America (10%), Africa (7%),
Central
Asia (5%), and South-east Asia (12%), they are not interested at all to spend much
water
in an
industrial
sense.

On the other hand
, South America, Africa, and South-east Asia
use
tremendous
water
for Agriculture purposes that
percentages
more than 70% in each area, which
averagely
in
Central
Asia less than 12% will be 100%.

In the meantime, domestic purposes provide a slight comparison in the region. South America (19%) leads the sequence, following by Europe (15%),
North
America (13%), which Africa (9%),
Central
Asia and Southeast Asia (7%). It looks all Continents
agree
to give minor priority in domestic
use
which all
water
used
percentages
are below 20%.

Overall
, the amount of
water
used
varies in each region. The data presents
North
America, and European continents have spent
water
for the
industrial
aims. Meanwhile, South America, Africa,
Central
Asia, and South-East Asia prefer agriculture as their priority for
water
used
.
Furthermore
, all Continents give minor priority in domestic
use
.
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