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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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The charts illustrate consumption of water precentagewise for 3 main purposes in six regions of the globe. Overall, majority of water usage is in industrial sector for North America and Europe, while countries such as South America, Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia use significant water resources for primary sector. Central and South-East part of Asia has minimum usage of water for domestic use. Central Asia is the exceptional part with maximum water usage which accounts for 88% in agriculture followed by South-East Asia with 7% decrease than that of former. Both this part accounted for 7% in domestic group, where rest resources is spent on industries. Water for agriculture made up 84% and 71% in Africa and South America respectively, Whereas about one-tenth portion comrised for domestic use in this two areas. Europe used about two-quarters of water for Industries. However, North America used 48% in this sector. 39% and 32% comprise water usage in primary sector for North America and Europe, while both the parts used one-tenth water for domestic use.
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for North America and Europe, while countries such as South America, Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia
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of Asia has minimum
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which accounts for 88% in agriculture followed by South-East Asia with 7% decrease than that of former. Both this
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accounted for 7% in
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in this two areas.

Europe
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about two-quarters of
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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