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the chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related to industries in one city of UK between 1989 to 2009.

the chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related to industries in one city of UK between 1989 to 2009. rj3k

The given chart provides the information about jobs in tourism - relatable to industries which were one city of UK from 1989 to 2009. The data has been calibrated in numerous. overall, it can be witnessed that in 1989, all activities were slightly similar but restaurants jobs were high while, in 2009, these jobs in all fields had reached on various numbers. it begun with, in 1989, sports or leisure along with travel and tourism jobs were equal but in case of hotels these were more than to it as well as in 1994, all figure were nearly same 800 and approximately 1200 respectively. Following this, in last three years from 1999 to 2009 the data of jobs in restaurants were stable which were 1600. Apart from it, in sports and leisure as well travel or tourism field the jobs were totally opposite to hotels data in lastly years between 1999 to 2009 because in this year both categories continously decreased 800 to more than 600 and 600 to 400 gradually.

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