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the chart below show the distribution of families with children employment status in Canada in 1796 and 2014

the chart below show the distribution of families with children employment status in Canada in 1796 and 2014 QGgw

The pie chart illustrates the employment rate in Canada with distribution of families and children the period of 1976 and 2014. The dual-earner couple has 20% increase in 2014 when comparing to 1976 which accounts 33 percentage, in sharp contrast to that the single salary given by men has declined 3 times in the year 2014 while in 19th century it demonstrates 51%. However, single income earned by matriarch has augmented over 3 percentage in 2014, however couples who have no income for their family has decreased 2 % in 2014, it should be commendable, moreover it indicates only 3% of whole rate. When coming to male and female lone parents, in 1976, the male lone parents has the least amount, but it has increased to 4% in 2014, Similarly female lone parents has a significant increase in 2014 while in 1976 the earnings was 8%, and in 2014 the lone is double that 1976.

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 has declined 3 times in the year 2014 while in 19th century it demonstrates 51%.

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 couples who have no income for their family has decreased 2 % in 2014, it should be commendable, moreover
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