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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. bg9W
The given six charts demonstrate amount of water taken for the variety of aims in six region of the earth. Wherein, the area of purpose is industrial, agricultural and domestic. Moreover, specified areas are North America, South America, Europe, Africa, central Asia and south east Asia. Overall, large amount of water has been taken by central Asia with the aim of agriculture. On other side, tiny amount of water consume by the same region for industrial use. In north America, the water amount near to half used of commercial use, 39% of whole water consume in agricultural and remaining tiny amount, 13 %, used in domestic use. South America use major amount water in agriculture, tiny ratio of water use in industrial use. Europe use water proportion similar to north America with tiny changes. In addition, remaining three regions use majority water amount in agricultural. While, minority ratio use during industrial use with 7% at Africa, 5% for the same use in central asia, 7% use in domestic area at south east Asia. In addition, 9% and 7% water taken for domestic use at Africa and central Asia respectively. According to all charts, it concluded that majority of water consume by agricultural sector.
The
given
six charts demonstrate
amount
of
water
taken for the variety of aims in six
region
of the earth. Wherein, the area of purpose is
industrial
,
agricultural
and
domestic
.
Moreover
, specified areas are North America, South America, Europe, Africa,
central Asia
and
south east
Asia.

Overall
, large
amount
of
water
has
been taken
by
central Asia
with the aim of agriculture. On other side,
tiny
amount
of
water
consume by the same region for
industrial
use
.

In
north America
, the
water
amount
near to half
used
of commercial
use
, 39% of whole
water
consume in
agricultural
and remaining
tiny
amount
, 13 %,
used
in
domestic
use
. South America
use
major
amount
water
in agriculture,
tiny
ratio of
water
use
in
industrial
use
. Europe
use
water
proportion similar to
north America
with
tiny
changes
.

In addition
, remaining three regions
use
majority
water
amount
in
agricultural
. While, minority ratio
use
during
industrial
use
with 7% at Africa, 5% for the same
use
in
central asia
, 7%
use
in
domestic
area at
south east
Asia.
In addition
, 9% and 7%
water
taken for
domestic
use
at Africa and
central Asia
respectively
.

According to all charts,
it concluded
that majority of
water
consume by
agricultural
sector.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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