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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. JW1j
The charts demonstrate the ratio of water consumption for industrial, agricultural and domestic usage in North and South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. Overall, Enormous amount of water is use for agricultural purpose in most of the areas, While least water usage for domestic cause. North America and Europe are the only two countries with the highest consumption of water for industrial use (48% and 53% respectively). Water utilization for domestic motive is almost same in North America(13%) and Europe(15%). Similarly, North America use 39% water for agricultural purpose, while Europe utilize 32%. Water utilization Agricultural motive in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia is more than 70% in every area. Water usage for domestic purpose is below 10% in Africa, Central and South east parts of Asia, where the numbers account for 19% in South America. The proportion of industrial water usage is below 12% in all these four areas likewise.
The charts demonstrate the ratio of
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in North and South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
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purpose in most of the areas, While least
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North America and Europe are the
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two countries with the highest consumption of
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for industrial
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(48% and 53%
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utilization for
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motive is almost same in North America(13%) and Europe(15%).
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39%
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32%. Water
utilization
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motive in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia is more than 70% in every area.
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purpose is below 10% in Africa, Central and South east parts of Asia, where the numbers account for 19% in South America. The proportion of industrial
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is below 12% in all these four areas
likewise
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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