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The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. KVam9

The pie chart depict how contribution from 5 distinct fuel method varied from 1985 to 2003 It can be clearly seen, that other renewable accounted for 1% of the energy in the year 1985, and experienced a threefold rise to 4% in 2003. Moreover, in 1985 Natural gas contribution in the beginning was 13% which increased to 23% at the end. Afterthat, the ratio of nuclear was 22% in the year 1985 and later a decline of 5% was observed. Furthermore, oil which had the biggest percentage in the year 1985 and went through a fall of 13% in 2003. In contrast, the ratio by hydrogen remained constant in both years at 4% Overall, while in the beginning oil was the biggest contributor and other renewable and hydrogen had the least ratio, Hydrogen remained the position and other renewable became the smallest contributor.

The pie chart depict how contribution from 5 distinct fuel method varied from 1985 to 2003

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, while in the beginning oil was the biggest contributor and other renewable and hydrogen had the least ratio, Hydrogen remained the position and other renewable became the smallest contributor. 