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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

The bar charts demonstrate us Japanese tourist figures which is travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and the line charts illustrate percentage of Japanese tourist who coming to australia in same time period. Overall, The number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad showed increase during the years almost 5 to 15 millions however japanese tourist percantage who coming to australia from displayed fluctate structure from zero to 6. When the looking at the Japanese tourist traveling abroad, it was seen that increase level almost same between every years as 1 millions. While the rise of numbers continued until 1990, 1 millions decrease happened between 1990 and 1991. After this time rising started again and numbers reached top point in 1995 with aproximately 15 millions. İn terms of percentage of Japanese tourst who coming to Australia, traveling started zero point before 1985. Although steady climbing was showed between 1985 and 1988, then a decline happened until 1989. From this point regular up on percatege observed until 1993 and also this year had the highest percantage.
The bar charts demonstrate us Japanese
tourist
figures which is travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and the line charts illustrate percentage of Japanese
tourist
who coming to
australia
in same time period.

Overall
, The number of Japanese
tourist
travelling abroad
showed
increase during the years almost 5 to 15 millions
however
japanese
tourist
percantage
who coming to
australia
from displayed
fluctate
structure from zero to 6.

When the looking at the Japanese
tourist
traveling abroad, it was
seen
that increase level almost same between every
years
as 1 millions. While the rise of numbers continued until 1990, 1 millions decrease happened between 1990 and 1991. After this time rising
started
again and numbers reached top point in 1995 with
aproximately
15 millions.

İn
terms of percentage of Japanese
tourst
who coming to Australia, traveling s
tarted
zero point b
efore
1985. Although steady climbing was s
howed
between 1985 and 1988, then a decline happened until 1989. From this point regular up on
percatege
observed until 1993 and a
lso
this year had the highest
percantage
.
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