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The chart shows electricity production from wind in 4 nations from 2000 to 2012.

The chart shows electricity production from wind in 4 nations from 2000 to 2012. b79B
The assigned line graph demonstrates the amount of electricity produced from wind energy in four different nations from 2000 to 2012. The data has been given in kilowatt hours (billions). Overall, it quite evident that the maximum electric power was generated in the United States of America, where such production was minimum in India; all countries had witnessed an incline in the amount of electricity production with the passage of time. According to the given line graph, the figure of electricity generation was around 10 billions kilowatt hours in Germany and USA in 2002 and these two nations had experienced a steady incline till 2006 ( approximately 27 billions kilowatt hours). But afterwards, American’s electricity production increased dramatically and it was recorded to be 100 and 140 kilowatt hours (billions) in the year 2010 and 2012, respectively, while the growth rate was minimal for Germany, amounting to nearly 50 kilowatt hours (billions). In the case of remaining two countries named, China and India, the amount of electricity production from wind was almost negligible during the first two years, followed by around 3 billions kilowatt hours in 2004. Then this production started to rise slowly and reached nearly 18 billions kilowatt hours after next 4 years (2008). By following dramatic increase, China achieved an amount of approximately 90 billions kilowatt hours in 2012, which was approximately triple than India (35 billions kilowatt hours) in the same year.
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produced from wind energy in four
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nations from 2000 to 2012. The data has been
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kilowatt
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(billions).

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in the United States of America, where such
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production
was minimum in India; all countries had witnessed an incline in the
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amount
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electricity
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with the passage of time.

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generation was around 10
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billions
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kilowatt
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in Germany and USA in 2002 and these two nations had experienced a steady incline till 2006
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approximately 27
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kilowatt
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.
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afterwards, American’s
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increased
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kilowatt
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(billions)
in the
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2010 and 2012,
respectively
, while the growth rate was minimal for Germany, amounting to
nearly
50
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In the case of remaining two countries named, China and India, the
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from wind was almost negligible during the
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two years, followed by around 3
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in 2004. Then this
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started
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4 years (2008). By following dramatic increase, China achieved an
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of approximately 90
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billions
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in 2012, which was approximately
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triple
than India (35
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in the same
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