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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. QVdOy
The given line charts illustrate the percentage of household with electrical appliances and a number of houses, of housework per week in households in one nation from 1920 to 2019. Overall, it can be seen that, the refrigerator and vacuum cleaner electrical appliances were both highest used in household while the maximum number of hours spent in 1920. In 1920, 40% of washing machine used in households after this value increased with 70% in 1960 and after this percentage fell by 5% in 1980. In addition, again rise up trend over the given years. Furthermore, refrigerator and vacuum cleaners both same trend which is the fridge started zero per cent by 1920 after significant grow and reached same position of the vaccum cleaner. Likewise, the vacuum cleaner starting at approximately 30 percentage in 1920 and continued to inclined over the period between 1940 and 1960. In contrast, this percentage remained over the period 20 years. On the other hand, people did forty percent hours of housework per week in 1920 then dramatically declined housework 35 hours and 20hours in 1940 to 1960 respectively. Nevertheless, this hours still remained over given the years.
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households
in one nation from 1920 to 2019.

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that, the refrigerator and vacuum
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electrical appliances were both highest
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used
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spent in 1920.

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after this value increased with 70% in 1960 and after this
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fell by 5% in 1980.
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, refrigerator and vacuum
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both same trend which is the fridge
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zero per cent by 1920 after significant grow and reached same position of the
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vaccum
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starting at approximately 30
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in 1920 and continued to inclined
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the period between 1940 and 1960.
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remained
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the period 20 years.

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