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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients , all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below described three kind of nutrition foods which are, sodium, saturated fat and added sugar that American consumers take their breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks by percentage wisely. Overall, there are four of meals time showed how to added those three nutrients in to the meals, which are sodium and saturated fat added by similar and while sugar describe different amount. In breakfast has shown sugar and fat are 16% while sodium little down by 2%. In lunch, nutrition of sodium added more than fat and sugar. It has shown 29 percentage while fat add 26% and sugar is the least added nutrition in the lunch. In the dinner sodium and fat mix more to the meals 43% and 37% respectively while sugar showed low percentage as a 23. In snacks, added sugar showed their percentage as a 42%, while saturated fat and sodium illustrate low percentages as a 21% and 14% respectively.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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