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The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for Senegal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates statistics of average monthly rainfall in millimeters whereas, graph provides data about temperature in Senegal. Overall, the amount of rainfall in Senegal touched its peak in April, in contrast, July was the most dry month. Furthermore, March experienced the highest temperature, while July was the coldest one. According to the details, being just under 22 in January, temperature went up significantly to 23. 5 in March, then followed by a dramatic decline to 20. 5 in July, before a sharp rise to just under 23. 5 in October. By October temperature had decreased gradually to 21. 5 in December. Meanwhile, being under 50 millimeters in January, rainfall experienced a far slight drop in February, before a dramatic increase to a far over 250 millimeters in April. Following this, the amount of rainfall went down to under 150 in March, which was almost similar to that of October and November. On the other hand, June, July, August and September witnessed a far lower amount of rainfall than that of following months accounting for under 50 millimeters. The amount of rainfall almost tripled in December that that of September.
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rainfall
in millimeters whereas, graph provides data about
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temperature
in Senegal.

Overall
, the
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amount
of
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rainfall
in Senegal touched its peak in April,
in contrast
, July was
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the most dry
month.
Furthermore
, March experienced the highest
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temperature
, while July was the coldest one.

According to the
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details
, being
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under 22 in January,
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temperature
went up
significantly
to 23. 5 in March, then followed by a dramatic decline to 20. 5 in July,
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before
a sharp rise to
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under 23. 5 in October. By October
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had decreased
gradually
to 21. 5 in December.

Meanwhile, being under 50 millimeters in January,
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rainfall
experienced a far slight drop in February,
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a dramatic increase to a far over 250 millimeters in April. Following this, the
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amount
of
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rainfall
went down to under 150 in March, which was almost similar to that of October and November.
On the other hand
, June, July, August and September witnessed a far lower
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amount
of
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rainfall
than that of following months accounting for under 50 millimeters. The
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of
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rainfall
almost tripled in December
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of September.
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IELTS academic The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for Senegal.

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