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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie charts compares the percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in breakfast, lunch, snacks and dinner eaten too much by people in USA. Overall it can be seen that, in dinner the highest portion of sodium and saturated fats are consumed by USA people while the least percentage of nutrients is consumed in breakfast. In detail, 43% of sodium, 37% of saturated fats and 23% of added sugar is taken more at the time of having dinner. At lunch the intake of nutrients by Americans is comparatively less with dinner i. e 29% sodium, 26% saturated fats and 19% added sugar. The percentage of sodium nutrient is equally consumed by people in breakfast and snacks standing with 14%. Besides, In snacks the Added sugar nutrient is consumed more with 42%. On the contrary, USA people nutrients portion is less during breakfast when compared with other typical meals.
The pie charts compares the percentages of sodium,
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In detail, 43% of sodium, 37% of
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The percentage of sodium
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portion is less during breakfast when compared with other typical meals.

IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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