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The diagram below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.

The diagram below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. 05L1
The given diagram describe the measurements of Eiffel Tower in Paris and an project is expanded underground area. Initially, the Eiffel Tower is located in Paris along side of river Seine and militarie also adjoining there right side corner. Many other buildings constructed in Paris such as hotel Des invalids, musee d orsay and musee du louvre. Probing ahead, Eiffel Tower has 1, 665 platform steps. Under the foundation of tower five level will be build. Lifts and glass ceiling also being planned. Ticket office and access of tower will be construed in first level. Besides this, in the second level shops and restaurants being planned. In the third stage, cinema and museum will be build. Moreover, parking will be planned in forth and fifth level. Overall, it was is crystal clear from diagram that the height of Eiffel Tower is 324m, weight is 10, 100 tonnes and the height of first platform is 57m and second platform has 115m long.
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describe
the measurements of Eiffel Tower in Paris and
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an
project
is expanded
underground area.
Initially
, the Eiffel Tower
is located
in Paris
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along side
of river Seine and
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militarie
also
adjoining there right side corner.
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Many
other buildings constructed in Paris such as hotel
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Des
invalids,
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musee
d
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orsay
and
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musee
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louvre. Probing ahead, Eiffel Tower has 1, 665 platform steps. Under the foundation of tower five
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level
will be build. Lifts and glass ceiling
also
being planned
. Ticket office and access of tower will
be construed
in
first
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level
.
Besides
this, in the second
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level
shops and restaurants
being planned
. In the third stage, cinema and museum will be build.
Moreover
, parking will
be planned
in forth and fifth
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level
.
Overall
, it
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was is
crystal
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clear
from diagram that the height of Eiffel Tower is
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324m
, weight is 10, 100 tonnes and the height of
first
platform is
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57m
and second platform has
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115m
long.
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IELTS academic The diagram below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.

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