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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients. BMqwj
The diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which can be unhealthy if consumed too much. The three types include sodium, saturated fats and added sugar. The data is taken from the United states of America. The first chart shows the average percentages of sodium. Dinner contains the most sodium 43 percent Breakfast and snacks include an equal proportion of sodium is consumed,
The diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which can be unhealthy if consumed too much. The three types include sodium, saturated fats and
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