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the charts below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in the state in Canada summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The given chat demonstrate the proportion of land which is used for growing grain from 1990 to 2010 in a state which is situated in Canada overall it is clearly seen that the redfield took the highest quantity of land for producing green whereas The Other was nearly covered the lowest area for harvesting the maximum amount of area which was lowered by redfield for growing grains from 1990 to 2000 was same about 60 acres on the other handit drop nearly about 10 acres in 2010 as compared to Sunny Valley it 239 occured in 1990 and after sometime it throws to about 3 occured in 2004 cultivation of grains now in 1990 the coupling planes a paid about half of the 17 acres for producing grain whereas in 2008 fell sharply to nearly 50 naked and after two years it took our small jump which is just increased by 1 ekad moreover between 1990 and 2000 others wise use some land for cultivation about half of the naked with in upcoming 10 year it nearly got neglect
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about 10 acres in 2010 as compared to Sunny Valley it 239
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