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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. DRqE

The figure illustrates the variation of temperature in various months across London, New York and Sydney. London and New York have similar variations of temperature across different months. but the temperature changes in Sydney resemble the inverse of the other two. The maximum temperature during the year is seen in July at London and Sydney having 24 and 30 degree respectively. On the other hand, Sydney marks its highest temperature of 25 degree in December and January. London and New York find their coolest weather during December and January marking temperatures of 10 and 5 degree respectively. Whereas, Sydney marks it cool weather during July with a temperature of 15 degree. Out of 3 cities, New York has the highest daytime in a year followed by London and Sydney having 2535, 2473, and 1180 hours of daytime annually respectively.

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