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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE VALUE OF ONE COUNTRY'S EXPORTS IN VARIOUS CATEGORIES DURING 2015 AND 2016.THE TABLE SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE CHANGE IN EACH CATEGORY OF EXPORTS IN 2016 COMPARED WITH 2015.SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES,AND MAKE COMPARISIONS WHERE RELAVANT.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE VALUE OF ONE COUNTRY'S EXPORTS IN VARIOUS CATEGORIES DURING 2015 AND 2016. THE TABLE SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE CHANGE IN EACH CATEGORY OF EXPORTS IN 2016 COMPARED WITH 2015. xjx1
The bar and table charts provide information about financial evaluation of export business in a particular country discussed in different sectors and proportions of change in values respectively in terms of years 2015 and 2016. overall, petroleum products and engineered goods raise major income, in contrast to the textile category which increased merely more than a quarter in its value. However, another classification of gems and jewellery showed downward trend in a period of a year. To begin with, petroleum goods has increased 3%for earning about $64 billions from year 2015 to year 2016. Alongside, the earnings of engineering goods which is approximately $56 billions in the year 2015 had a considerable increase with 8. 5% in the year 2016. Although income from agricultural products increased to nearly 31%to 32%, it is only 0. 81% rise in its proportions. It is worth to be notice that, the textile category soar up to 15. 24% and on the other side gems and jewellery decreased to 5. 18% over a year. Based on the above data, even though textiles experience a significant rise, the income produced by it quite less compared to other sectors.
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has increased 3%for earning about $64 billions from
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2015 to
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2016. Alongside, the earnings of engineering
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which is approximately $56 billions in the
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2015 had a considerable increase with 8. 5% in the
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2016. Although income from agricultural products increased to
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0. 81% rise in its proportions. It is worth to be notice that, the textile category soar up to 15. 24% and on the other side gems and
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decreased to 5. 18% over a
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. Based on the above data,
even though
textiles experience a significant rise, the income produced by it quite less compared to other sectors.
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IELTS academic THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE VALUE OF ONE COUNTRY'S EXPORTS IN VARIOUS CATEGORIES DURING 2015 AND 2016. THE TABLE SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE CHANGE IN EACH CATEGORY OF EXPORTS IN 2016 COMPARED WITH 2015.

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