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the chart below shows the expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010

the chart below shows the expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010 yjLM

The chart illustrates the spending of different countries, namely France and Great Britain, on consumer goods in 2010. The biggest category in both countries was cars. It is also of note that the consumption rates in the UK were higher than in France, not included computers and perfumes. With cars, it is obvious that the French spent most of their money on cars at about 400, 000 pounds whereas, the UK's amount was higher, who spent 450, 000 pounds. Next, the rate of people in the UK paid for books was towering than French, with respective figure 400, 000 and 300, 000 pounds. Then, UK people disbursed a total amount of 150, 000 pounds opposing to the French spending 350, 000 pounds on cameras. On the other hand, the French also loved to pay for the perfumes than the UK with the respective money were 200, 000 pounds and 150, 000 pounds. Lastly, computers were the second-most popular consumer product in France with spending of about 380, 000 pounds, while in the UK, computers were fourth on the spending list at 350, 000 pounds

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 of note that the consumption rates in the UK were higher than in France, not included computers and perfumes.

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