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The charts below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The given bar chart gives a clear picture of acres of land utilized for the purpose of agriculture admist years 1990 and 2010. This report is limited to a few cities in a state of Canada. Firstly, throughout the years, agriculture as an occupation seems to be declining due to shortage of land space. Let's start with Red Field, this city has more than 50 acres of agricultural land that seemed to be linearly decreasing. In 1990 and 2000, 60 acres were used to cultivate grains. Alas, this rate came down to 50 in the following year. Likewise, other cities which had comparatively 50 to 55 acres less than the Red Field, showed similar degress in terms of area. In 2010, others possessed less than 5 acres to grow crops. However, this did not seem to be the case with the Sunny Valley and the Spring Plains. It appears that these cities had more than 35 acres of agricultural land in 1990. Considerable decrease in the use of land for crop cultivation had been observed by 2010. The only contrasting feature is that, in the 2000 Sunny Valley's grain production boomed to 43 acres whereas it scanted in the Spring Plains, with only 20 acres. Thus, throughout these years there had been a fall in use of land for production of grains in the cities of the Red Field, Sunny Valley, Spring Plains and others. Where each year we'd seen decrease in the number of acres, a contrasting characteristic in the number of acres used for cultivation.
The
given
bar chart gives a
clear
picture of
acres
of
land
utilized for the purpose of agriculture
admist
years 1990 and 2010. This report
is limited
to a few
cities
in a state of Canada.

Firstly
, throughout the years, agriculture as an occupation seems to be declining due to shortage of
land
space.
Let
's
start
with Red Field, this city has more than 50
acres
of agricultural
land
that seemed to be
linearly
decreasing. In 1990 and 2000, 60
acres
were
used
to cultivate grains. Alas, this rate came down to 50 in the following
year
.
Likewise
, other
cities
which had
comparatively
50 to 55
acres
less than the Red Field,
showed
similar
degress
in terms of area. In 2010, others possessed less than 5
acres
to grow crops.

However
, this did not seem to be the case with the Sunny Valley and the Spring Plains. It appears that these
cities
had more than 35
acres
of agricultural
land
in 1990. Considerable decrease in the
use
of
land
for crop cultivation had
been observed
by 2010. The
only
contrasting feature is that, in the 2000 Sunny Valley's grain production boomed to 43
acres
whereas it scanted in the Spring Plains, with
only
20 acres.

Thus
, throughout these years there had been a fall in
use
of
land
for production of grains in the
cities
of the Red Field, Sunny Valley, Spring Plains
and others
. Where each
year
we'd
seen
decrease in the number of
acres
, a contrasting characteristic in the number of
acres
used
for cultivation.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada.

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