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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The following pie charts illustrate five different reasons behind people travelling by car or by bicycle. Overall, it can be seen that mostly people used bicycle due less pollution which is very efficient whereas people contributed more for driving as they choose comfort more. Regarding safer perspective to drive than cycling, only 11% had the reason of usage which is the least as compared to other reasons. Therefore, people used their car for carrying things to work and faster access were almost 14% respectively. Moreover, comfort is the highest proportion seen here by individuals and safety resulting to approximately nearly half whereas 21% reason was for distance to work. Considering the reason to move bicycle to work is for health and fitness with 30% as well as less pollution. Moreover, with no costs, faster driving and no parking problems made up to a total of less than half of the proportion accounting to 40%.
The following pie charts illustrate five
different
reasons
behind
people
travelling by car or by bicycle.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that
mostly
people
used
bicycle due less pollution which is
very
efficient whereas
people
contributed more for driving as they choose comfort more.

Regarding safer perspective to drive than cycling,
only
11% had the
reason
of usage which is the least as compared to other
reasons
.
Therefore
,
people
used
their car for carrying things to work and faster access were almost 14%
respectively
.
Moreover
, comfort is the highest proportion
seen
here by individuals and safety resulting to approximately
nearly
half whereas 21%
reason
was for distance to work.

Considering the
reason
to
move
bicycle to work is for health and fitness with 30%
as well
as less pollution.
Moreover
, with no costs, faster driving and no parking problems made up to a total of less than half of the proportion accounting to 40%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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