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This report will sum up the table which shows information on the percentages of savings in the personal income of people in seven countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.

This report will sum up the table which shows information on the percentages of savings in the personal income of people in seven countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000. aEB3o
This report will sum up the table which shows information on the percentages of savings in the personal income of people in seven countries; Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK and US in 1970, 1990 and 2000. It is readily apparent from the information provided that Canada and the UK had an upward trend in income and savings percentages overall, and France, Germany, Italy, Japan and USA were in a downward trend over the time. Looking at the information in greater detail, it can be seen that the percentage of income to citizens in these countries significantly decreased in 200 compared to in 1970. In 1970, the highest saving in Italians was around 29. 5%, while in Canada the percentage of their savings was lowest, about 5. 6%. If we consider in 1990 Italy was a high percentage agin, while the USA also lower income became 5. 5%. France and Japan were able to save more in 2000 the highest percentages of their income and Canasa was lowest in 200 years (13. 6% and 1. 9%, respectively).
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in seven countries; Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK and US in 1970, 1990 and 2000.

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, and France, Germany, Italy, Japan and USA were in a downward trend over the time.

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saving
in Italians was around 29. 5%, while in Canada the
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of their
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savings
was lowest, about 5. 6%. If we consider in 1990 Italy was a high
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, while the USA
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became 5. 5%. France and Japan were able to save more in 2000 the highest
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Canasa
was lowest in 200 years (13. 6% and 1. 9%,
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IELTS academic This report will sum up the table which shows information on the percentages of savings in the personal income of people in seven countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.

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