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The charts below given information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050

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The pie chart illustrate that the age of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050 Aurat age group of 15-59 years population aroplane the major rule as compared to 0-14 years age where play the minor role in both country. Firstly 60 of age groups were covered almost 50% in 2000 however it is deposited about 30% after the 50 years. The second 50% were covered 0-14 and 15-59 age groups respectively 46 and 4 percentage in 2000 after 50 years 15-59 age groups were increased per percent while the days 14 years ages population gets likely increase with 2% in Yemen Second in Italy the youngsters when covered almost 60 percentage in 2000 and about 40% wear covered with children and senior citizen respectively 25 and 15 percentage. after half of decade senior citizen were increased 22%. the population of youngsters and children were decreased respectively 20 and 3% in Italy
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IELTS academic The charts below given information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050

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