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The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Yd97r
The given chart illustrates about the amount of money spent for buying books through the internet. And the pie chart shows the total number of books bought in the united kingdom. Overall, we could see that in the initial years it had increased drastically and over the years it just had an average increase, After that the domination by england is a huge highlight. To begin with, In the year 1998 it had increased dramatically over from 11 millions to 16 and once again there was a jump to 19 although the initial stage was notable then it had increased constantly over next three years in the rise rate of 2. The majority of books in United Kingdom had been bought by England where it covers 81 percentage, and after that wales has contributed with 10% then scotland and northern ireland following with 8% and 1%.
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shows
the total number of books
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bought
in the
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had an average increase, After that the domination by
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england
is a huge highlight.

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begin
with, In the
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year
1998 it had increased
dramatically
over from 11 millions to 16 and once again there was a jump to 19 although the initial stage was notable then it had increased
constantly
over
next
three years in the rise rate of 2.

The majority of books
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in United Kingdom
had been
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bought
by England where it covers 81 percentage, and after that wales has contributed with 10% then
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scotland
and
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northern ireland
following with 8% and 1%.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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