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The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course

The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course KwlJM
The graph shows the amount of weekly hours spent studying in the library, with a tutor or lecturer or using the internet during a 2 year course. Overall, the use of the internet increased, while time in class and lectures declined and time in the library varied. The most striking trend is that there is a dramatic increase in the use of the internet throughout the period, especially between the first and second semesters of each period, with hours increasing from about 3 at the beginning of the course to over 10 by the end. Hours spent in a classroom or lecture were initially the highest at approximately 7 hours a week, increasing to 8 hours in the second semester of the first term. However, the figure fell during the second year to finish at only 5 hours a week. Time in the library was the most fluctuating, initially falling from 4 hours down to about 3 hours, then rapidly increasing to 8 hours before once again declining to end at about 6 hours.
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the amount of weekly
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spent studying in the library, with a tutor or lecturer or using the internet during a
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2 year
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Overall
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of the internet increased, while time in
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class
and lectures declined and time in the library varied.

The most striking trend is that there is a dramatic increase in the
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use
of the internet throughout the period,
especially
between the
first
and second semesters of each period, with
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hours
increasing from about 3 at the beginning of the course to over 10 by the
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end
.

Hours spent in a classroom or lecture were
initially
the highest at approximately 7
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a week, increasing to 8
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in the second semester of the
first
term.
However
, the figure fell during the second year to finish at
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5
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a week.

Time in the library was the most fluctuating,
initially
falling from 4
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down to about 3
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, then
rapidly
increasing to 8
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once again declining to
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at about 6
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