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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections in 2050

The pie charts illustrate the data of people's ages in two countries namely: Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and 2050 projections. Overall it is obviously show that ages 15-59 years occupied the vast majority in both country and both years. It is noticeable that in year 2000 in Yemen youngsters like 0-14 years of age compromise the 50. 1% of the total population. Moreover the senior citizens which in the ages 60 plus years old both gain around 3-5 % in both years. However the middle age which is 15-59 years old in the year 2000 shows less than 50% with compare to year 2050 with a slight increased to 57. 3%. The country of Italy in year 2000 accumulate 3/4 of the total populations in ages 15-59% years old. While 1/4 and 1/8 % remain to youngsters and old people. In year 2050 perspective the number of teenager and middle ages dropped to 46. 2% in total almost 1/2 of the overall number of citizens in the said country. In addition, the senior citizens double in numbers from 24. 1% to 42. 3% in the future year. While youngsters remain stable in projection year.
The pie charts illustrate the data of
people
's
ages
in two
countries
namely
: Yemen and Italy in the
year
2000 and 2050 projections.
Overall
it is
obviously
show
that
ages
15-59 years occupied the vast majority in both
country
and both years. It is noticeable that in
year
2000 in Yemen youngsters like 0-14 years of
age
compromise the 50. 1% of the total population.
Moreover
the senior citizens which in the
ages
60 plus years
old
both gain around 3-5 % in both years.
However
the middle
age
which is 15-59 years
old
in the
year
2000
shows
less than 50% with compare to
year
2050 with a slight increased to 57. 3%. The
country
of Italy in
year
2000 accumulate 3/4 of the total populations in
ages
15-59% years
old
. While 1/4 and 1/8 % remain to youngsters and
old
people
. In
year
2050 perspective the number of
teenager
and middle
ages
dropped to 46. 2% in total almost 1/2 of the
overall
number of citizens in the said
country
.
In addition
, the senior citizens double in numbers from 24. 1% to 42. 3% in the future
year
.
While
youngsters remain stable in projection
year
.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections in 2050

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